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Text from vaness182 - English

  • 27th May.

  • Today is Monday, 27th May.
    • Last days I'm feel ill, tomorrow I'm going to appointment with my doctor, I don't want go because I don't have good luck when I go to see the doctor because, always I finish interned.
    • But, I need go because I feel very drowned, I can't breathe, the weather doesn't help, it's rainning now, like all day, I don't like this weather, now, I listening a new song for my, that say : "beach comber", really if I understand good is a beach, I want holidays on the beach.
  • I don't know why so I fall ill both.
  • Last days, the nurse injection medicine on my tail, I don't like the injections, not for the pain, if not, now my tail is a strainer.
  • i don't want more injections only I need that Xiomy pamper me, I need hugs and touchs.
  • I need sweet words and somebody comb my hair, I need taking her hand and walk on the love street.
  • My mommy said that I'm very consensual but it's that so wrong, now I need say "can I get my privacy with Xiomy I need give to her a kiss, but today, everybody come to my home and I don't have privacy, I need shout: "I won't to die." The hospital is hundred miles to my home, I don't like go because I need cross the citadel.
  • Now I remembered a emo girl so cute, she is 9 or 10 years and now I can't out of my mind because awwww so beautiful girl.
  • I like all fashions although I don't share it, I like see girls guys that wear hundred styles pride that themselves, because I remember my self because I'm proud of myself and the my girlfriend although it brought much problems.
  • Changed the topic, when I was another loner, never I imagined fall in love, I though the the love is for dumbs, but now I can't said the same.
  • I'dont know why but, now I feel mush energy, must be my girl on my back or the tea that I drink, or the love that I feel, now, I could say: "the love is the medicine more important, smile and laugh are things that everybody must do."

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • Last days I'm feel ill, tomorrow I'm going to appointment with my doctor, I don't want go because I don't have good luck when I go to see the doctor because, always I finish interned.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Last days I'm feel was ill, tomorrow I'm going to have an appointment with my doctor, I don't want to go because I don't have good luck when I go to see the doctor because, always I finish interned.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
    • But, I need go because I feel very drowned, I can't breathe, the weather doesn't help, it's rainning now, like all day, I don't like this weather, now, I listening a new song for my, that say : "beach comber", really if I understand good is a beach, I want holidays on the beach.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • But, I need to go because I feel very drowned, I can't breathe, the weather doesn't helpsuit me at all , it's rainning now, like all day,as usual. I don't like this weather, now, I am listening to a new song for my, that say :named "beach comber", reallyit's true that if I understand good is a beach, I wantknow that beach is a good place to go I want to have holidays on the beach.re
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • Last days, the nurse injection medicine on my tail, I don't like the injections, not for the pain, if not, now my tail is a strainer.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • My mommy said that I'm very consensual but it's that so wrong, now I need say "can I get my privacy with Xiomy I need give to her a kiss, but today, everybody come to my home and I don't have privacy, I need shout: "I won't to die." The hospital is hundred miles to my home, I don't like go because I need cross the citadel.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • Now I remembered a emo girl so cute, she is 9 or 10 years and now I can't out of my mind because awwww so beautiful girl.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • I like all fashions although I don't share it, I like see girls guys that wear hundred styles pride that themselves, because I remember my self because I'm proud of myself and the my girlfriend although it brought much problems.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11
    • Changed the topic, when I was another loner, never I imagined fall in love, I though the the love is for dumbs, but now I can't said the same.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
  • Zdanie 12
    • I'dont know why but, now I feel mush energy, must be my girl on my back or the tea that I drink, or the love that I feel, now, I could say: "the love is the medicine more important, smile and laugh are things that everybody must do."
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12