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on the day of the race last week I attended a leisurely stroll held by Telecoms, on the same day I felt two things at once is happy and sad.
I was happy because I was able to gift the bike of my dreams but I am also sad because one of my friends get mad at me because he did not get a gift too.

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- on the day of the race last week I attended a leisurely stroll held by Telecoms, on the same day I felt two things at once is happy and sad.
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- I was happy because I was able to gift the bike of my dreams but I am also sad because one of my friends get mad at me because he did not get a gift too.
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