Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Ne korektita

Text from LINHO - English

Originala Versio
Versio Korektita

My weekend.
My weekend was very nice.
- Saturday my friends were at my house and we did a dinner.
- On Sunday, I watched the game on my team, we win.

LINHOMay 2013Voĉdoni nun!
- Raporti kiel spamo?

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Titolo
- My weekend.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Titolo
Frazo 1
- My weekend was very nice.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
Frazo 2
- Saturday my friends were at my house and we did a dinner.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- Saturday my friends were at my house and we ~~did a~~had dinner.
  spiritualmusician Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- Saturday my friends were at my house and we ~~did a~~had dinner.
  JSHINE Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- SOn saturday my friends were at my house and we ~~did a~~had dinner.
  misskylie Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
Frazo 3
- On Sunday, I watched the game on my team, we win.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- On Sunday, I watched the game on, my team, was playing and we wion.
  spiritualmusician Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- On Sunday, I watched the game onand my team, w~~e wi~~on.
  JSHINE Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3