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Testo da riichard_c - English

  • I had a date with someone

    • Well, I wore my best suit to meet someone who I contacted by Facebook, well, she lives close to my house, however, I didn't meet her.
    • I went to her house and she looks at me and she I asked to enter to her house and I said of course after that I felt some nervous so I asked to take seat after a few minutes she delivered me a big plate of food.
    • I spent all the night with her, after a week I come back to her house but this time she looked some strange , she doesn't even was kind with me. that fact was like someone sticks a knife in my heart so I asked to her why does she have that behavior toward me , she answered that had reconciled with her ex-boyfriend , I picked my cap and left her house

PER FAVORE, AIUTA A CORREGGERE OGNI FRASE! - English

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    • I went to her house and she looks at me and she I asked to enter to her house and I said of course after that I felt some nervous so I asked to take seat after a few minutes she delivered me a big plate of food.
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    • I went to her house and she looksed at me and then she I asked me to enter to her house (she invited me in) and I said of course , after that I felt was somehow nervous so I asked to take seat, after a few minutes she deliveredbrought me a big plate of food.
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    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 2AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 2
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    • I spent all the night with her, after a week I come back to her house but this time she looked some strange , she doesn't even was kind with me. that fact was like someone sticks a knife in my heart so I asked to her why does she have that behavior toward me , she answered that had reconciled with her ex-boyfriend , I picked my cap and left her house
      Vota adesso!
    • I spent all the night with her, after a week I come back to her house but this time she looked somea little bit strange , she doewasn't even was at all kind with me. that facit was like someone sticks a knife in my heart so I asked to her why does she have thatsuch behavior toward me , she answered that she already had reconciliated with her ex-boyfriend , so I picked my cap and left her house
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      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 3AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 3