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AIUTA A CORREGGERE ORA! Errato

Testo da riichard_c - English

  • A mad story

    • Once upon time an old man, he was digging and found a strange freeze woman by ice when suddenly by of the hot sun the ice started to melt slowly, the old man hid behind a tree , when whole the ice melt she was naked and shook herself and her body was shining and the old men scared and fled, the woman used her hair as a weapon and frozen him then she unfroze him to said him that got calm then she started to explain him who is she and also where does she come from, when he understood everything, he left without saying nothing.
  • The woman called him before he left her and asked him > why do you leave? and he answered her > Go away, leave this world because the humans destroy even their owns earth and I know they will destroy you.

PER FAVORE, AIUTA A CORREGGERE OGNI FRASE! - English

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    • Once upon time an old man, he was digging and found a strange freeze woman by ice when suddenly by of the hot sun the ice started to melt slowly, the old man hid behind a tree , when whole the ice melt she was naked and shook herself and her body was shining and the old men scared and fled, the woman used her hair as a weapon and frozen him then she unfroze him to said him that got calm then she started to explain him who is she and also where does she come from, when he understood everything, he left without saying nothing.
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    • Once upon time, an old man, he was digging and found a strange freeze woman by ice when swoman frozen in ice. Suddenly, byecause of the hot sun, the ice started to melt slowly, t.The old man hided himself behind a tree , w. When whole the ice melted, she was naked and. She shook herself and her body was shining and t. The old men was scared and fled,tried to flee but the woman used her hair as a weapon andto froeezen him, then she unfrozen him to said him that got calm thenand asked him to calm down, after what she started to explain him who is she and also where does she come from, w. When he understood everything, he leftwas about to left her without saying noanything.
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      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1
  • Frase 2
    • The woman called him before he left her and asked him > why do you leave? and he answered her > Go away, leave this world because the humans destroy even their owns earth and I know they will destroy you.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 2AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 2