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  • Hello I'm writing this summary for my thesis.
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    • With the increase of automated systems, driven particularly by the Just In Time, the availability of machines became a key issue for industrials.
  • Its breakdown impacts not only the production, but also the quality of the product.
    • Therefore, it seems obvious to train his teams efficiently in maintenance.
  • This will avoid any downtime delays.
  • Although training is one of the pillars of the Lean approach, it often remains neglected by managers, maybe, because of the complexity of its implementation.
  • Relying on the training of its collaborators, in a context of a race for profits, is a challenging goal.
  • It requires a strategic investment in well adopted tools.
    • In this thesis, we will suggest two solutions for maintenance training : the remote expert assistant and the procedure assistant.
    • Its aim is to reduce the training cycle and decrease error rates related to a a misunderstanding of paper instructions.
  • The functional and technical details will be exposed in this thesis.
  • Moreover, the results of acceptability tests at FM Logistic and the recipes of deployment will also be presented and discussed.

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