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    • Everything in the world will born and will die.
    • For as far back as we can trace our existence, humans have been fascinated with death and resurrection.
  • But is resurrection really possible?
  • And what is the actual difference between a living creature and a dead body anyway?
  • Someone delves into the scientific theories that seek to answer these age-old questions.
    • As we know, when someone dead, if we want to keep tidy their bodies, we’ll froze their bodies.
    • Because the ice contains many things can keep their bodies tidy.
  • And a long time ago, Pharaohs were Egypt’s kings.
    • After they dead, many people pour salt on their bodies and made them to many mummies.
    • Then, people took the mummies to the Pyramids.
    • Now, when we dead, our relatives will take our bodies in a box and take it in the ground or they’ll burn our bodies.
  • Okay, may be this text is scary but I think it’ll useful for us.

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