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I'm new.
- Hi!I'm here to learn English, Italian and French.
- I'd like to meet someone to talk by skype and improve my English.
- Next year, I have to do an exam in the university and I'd like to pass it.
For this reason I need some help to learn new words and how and when use the differents verbs tenses.

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- I'm new.
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- Hi!I'm here to learn English, Italian and French.
  투표하세요!
- Hi! I'm here to learn English, Italian and French.
  olliecampbell 댓글 1
  
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- Hi! I'm here to learn English, Italian, and French.
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- I'd like to meet someone to talk by skype and improve my English.
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- I'd like to meet someone to talk bywith on skype ~~and~~to improve my English.
  olliecampbell 댓글 1
  
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- Next year, I have to do an exam in the university and I'd like to pass it.
  투표하세요!
- Next year, I have to do an exam ~~in the~~at university and I'd like to pass it.
  olliecampbell 댓글 1
  
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- Next year, I have to dotake an exam ~~in the~~at university and I'd like to pass it.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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- For this reason I need some help to learn new words and how and when use the differents verbs tenses.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4