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AIDER A CORRIGER MAINTENANT !Corrigé

Rédigé par EllaBu - English

  • Describing the photo

  • I always take a lot of photos and today I'm going to tell you about this one.
  • Look at this amazing picture!
    • To begin with, I took this photo when I attended an open lesson at school where my brother was studing.
    • In the center of course is my younger brother.
    • He is sitting at the desk and listen to his teacher.
    • At the background we can see his classmates.
  • There are many reasons why I took this photo.
    • For example, I want to watch at this photo in many years with my brother and remember school days.
  • I decided to show you this picture because I'd like to share my feelings.
  • My brother is very cute here.
    • To sum up, I want to say that good photos are needed to remember pleasant moments.

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