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  • Modern illiteracy

  • It is sometimes argued that it should be more rational if the government would additionally finance education for mature people, instead of for children.
    • However, there are those who suppose that such action is an unreasonable waste of money.
    • This essay supports the later view because it is obvious that if adults really needed such knowledge, they would undoubtedly have acquired it.
    • Firstly, this essay will discuss the supposedly financial problem that state administration is going to solve with extra subsidies, secondly, it will analyze the reasons that prevent adults from becoming literate.
    • There is an opinion that the main part of those who did not received a primary education in their youth due to lack of necessary funds in the past.
  • But, it is worth noting that with the advent of modern computer technologies that allow you to learn independently, the situation radically changed.
  • Unfortunately, little do people realize that today contemporary educational software provides an absolutely free opportunity to master the skills of reading and writing.
    • For example, it has been reported by the world association of tutors that such programs are not only teach faster than the regular teachers, but also accessible to anyone’s level of income.
    • On the other hand, it is obvious that the main reason of the illiteracy of the adult population today is the absence of a pressing need for such in everyday life.
    • Moreover, most people without any education have adapted and live a happier life, although they acknowledge that they would not like to receive it.
  • So, it is not surprisingly that, for instance, according to the report of the same organization, only 8 percent of the respondents expressed a desire to start literacy training.
  • In conclusion, taking into account all written above, I am firmly convinced that government should not devote additional resources for eradicating illiteracy programs.
  • This is because neither do it is believed that persons of ripe years need to obtain such skills, nor do it could be trusted that special financing could provoke them to study.

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    • It is sometimes argued that it should be more rational if the government would additionally finance education for mature people, instead of for children.
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    • This essay supports the later view because it is obvious that if adults really needed such knowledge, they would undoubtedly have acquired it.
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    • This essay supports the latter view because it is obvious that if adults really needed such knowledge, they would undoubtedly have acquired it.
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    • Firstly, this essay will discuss the supposedly financial problem that state administration is going to solve with extra subsidies, secondly, it will analyze the reasons that prevent adults from becoming literate.
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    • Firstly, this essay will discuss the supposedly financial problems that state administration is going to solve with extra subsidies, secondly, it will analyze the reasons that prevent adults from becoming literate.
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    • There is an opinion that the main part of those who did not received a primary education in their youth due to lack of necessary funds in the past.
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    • There is an opinion that the main part of those who did not received a primary education in their youth due to lack of necessary funds in the past.
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    • But, it is worth noting that with the advent of modern computer technologies that allow you to learn independently, the situation radically changed.
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    • Unfortunately, little do people realize that today contemporary educational software provides an absolutely free opportunity to master the skills of reading and writing.
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    • For example, it has been reported by the world association of tutors that such programs are not only teach faster than the regular teachers, but also accessible to anyone’s level of income.
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    • For example, it has been reported by the world association of tutors that such programs are not only teachaught faster than the regular teachers, but also accessible to anyone’s level of income.
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    • On the other hand, it is obvious that the main reason of the illiteracy of the adult population today is the absence of a pressing need for such in everyday life.
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    • On the other hand, it is obvious that the main reason of the illiteracy of the adult population today is the absence of a pressing need for suchof it in everyday life.
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    • Moreover, most people without any education have adapted and live a happier life, although they acknowledge that they would not like to receive it.
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    • Moreover, most people without any education have adapted and lived a happier life, although they acknowledge that they would not like to receive it.
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    • So, it is not surprisingly that, for instance, according to the report of the same organization, only 8 percent of the respondents expressed a desire to start literacy training.
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    • In conclusion, taking into account all written above, I am firmly convinced that government should not devote additional resources for eradicating illiteracy programs.
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    • This is because neither do it is believed that persons of ripe years need to obtain such skills, nor do it could be trusted that special financing could provoke them to study.
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