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- freindly
- I think the best freind is yourself first.if you dont like yourself,how someone alse likes you.is n t it?but heuman is compelex .and arent all same.

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- ~~freindly~~I think it will be better if you make a title that is the main idea for all sentences, such as : "Yourself - your bestfriend" or just simply "Friend". "Friendly" is a adjective, it isn't good for making a titile.
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- I think the best freind is yourself first.if you dont like yourself,how someone alse likes you.is n t it?but heuman is compelex .and arent all same.
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- I think ~~the~~ your best freiend is you yourself first.i If you don't like yourself, how can someone aelse likes you~~.is n~~ , isn't it?but heuman iss are compelex, .and a~~rent all~~ll aren't same.
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- I think ~~the best freind is~~you are your~~self~~ first.i best friend. If you don't like yourself, how ~~someone alse likes you.is n t it?b~~can anyone else do? But heuman iss are compelex .and ~~arent all same~~everybody's different.
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- I think the best freiend isof yours / your bestfriend should be yourself first. Because if you don't like yourself, how ~~some~~anyone aelse ~~likes you.is n t it?but~~can do, right ? However, heuman isare compelex .and aren't ~~all sam~~the same.¶
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  ('But' shouldn't stand at the first position in a sentence.)
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