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- Hi everyone !
Hi !
- Today I was shopping with my best friends.
- It's so very fun !
- I have buy a shirt a flower, a jeggind and a necklase elephant.
- And we have eat a ice to carame !
- She was delicious!
- Now I go learn my lesson because monday I will a test.

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- Hi everyone !
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- Hi eEveryone !
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- Hi !
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- Today I was shopping with my best friends.
  투표하세요!
- Today I wasent shopping with my best friends.
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- Today I wasent shopping with my best friends.
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- It's so very fun !
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- It's so ~~very~~ fun !
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- It' was so ~~very~~ fun !
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- It' was so ~~very~~ fun !
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- It~~'s so~~ was very fun !
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- I have buy a shirt a flower, a jeggind and a necklase elephant.
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- I ~~have buy~~bought a shirt, a flower, a pair of jeggindgs, and a ~~necklase elephant~~n elephant necklace.
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- And we have eat a ice to carame !
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- And we ~~have eat a ice to carame~~ ate ice cream!
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- And we ha~~ve eat a ice to car~~d caramel ice creame !
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- And we ~~have eat a ice to car~~ate a caramel ice creame !
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- She was delicious!
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- ~~She~~It was delicious!
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- Now I go learn my lesson because monday I will a test.
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- Now I ~~go learn~~will go study my lesson because ~~monday I will a test~~I have a test on Monday.
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- Now I gam going to learn my lesson because ~~monday I will a test~~I have a test on Monday.
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- Now I ~~go learn~~am going to study my lesson because ~~monday I will a test~~I have a test on Monday.
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- Now I'm go ~~learn~~ing to my lesson to study because mon Monday I ~~will~~have a test.
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