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- Can anybody help me practice my english?
- My name is Felipe, 24 years old , live in Brazil São Paulo.
- I would like if somebody can help me practice my english but lately I have needed so much because I'm visiting many countries and the english has saved my life.
- If somebody is interested in exchanging skills and knowledge I'm here.

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- Can anybody help me practice my english?
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- Can anybody help me practice my eEnglish?
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- My name is Felipe, 24 years old , live in Brazil São Paulo.
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- My name is Felipe, 24 years old ,I live in Brazil ,São Paulo.
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- I would like if somebody can help me practice my english but lately I have needed so much because I'm visiting many countries and the english has saved my life.
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- I would like i~~f somebody can~~t if anyone could help me practice ~~my e~~English ~~but l~~. Lately, It ha~~ve needed so much~~s been so essential because I'mve been visiting many countries and the eEnglish has saved my life.
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- If somebody is interested in exchanging skills and knowledge I'm here.
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- If ~~somebody~~anyone is interested in ~~exchanging skills and knowledge~~sharing expertise and ideas I'm here.
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