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  • My dream

    • I've always wanted to leave France one day to move to Canada.
    • I think, If I really want to do it, I can do it !
    • And I have a plan.
    • Firstly, I have to pass baccalaureate and then go to faculty of medecine because I want to be oncologist.
    • End after my studies I'll go to Toronto where a part of my family lives.
    • They said to me one day, that they can take me for a while at their home.
  • They are so kind !
    • And thanks to them, I've got a chance to live in Canada !

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