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  • This Time (part 11)

    • This Time (part 11) Thinking we are free by bieng modern consumerist-slave and seeking an infinite unsatisfiable materialism purpose is what we want from us and it does work.
  • If you think you're free, then, there's no escape possible.
    • In a system where we control our thoughts and where we make a fool every nonconformist ideas that could high-rise human life and make it mire liveable.
    • We have gotten to the point where we face of an imbalance between our two sides brain hemispheres.
    • That delibarate lack of right-brain development has driven ourself to an inevitable upcoming chaotic existence.
    • Focusing on developing the right-brain would give us the key of an workable-utopian life that some of us has already so much dreamed.
    • The functions of this side of our brain has been undervalue by the system, it is more well perceived from the circle of acquaintances to follow lawyer study rather aiming for artistry.
  • However its right-brain also provides us empathy, compassion, understanding other people's emotions, inventiveness, big-picture thinking, creativity...
    • All the missing valours we need for a better world are hidding by the elite leaving the population with the idea of nothing could really change.

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    • This Time (part 11) Thinking we are free by bieng modern consumerist-slave and seeking an infinite unsatisfiable materialism purpose is what we want from us and it does work.
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      Thinking we are free by b      ieing modern consumerist-slaves and seeking an infinite unsatisfiable materialism purpose is what we want from us and it does work.
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    • In a system where we control our thoughts and where we make a fool every nonconformist ideas that could high-rise human life and make it mire liveable.
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    • In a system where we control our thoughts and where we make a fool out of every nonconformist ideas that could high-rise human life and make it miore liveable.
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    • Focusing on developing the right-brain would give us the key of an workable-utopian life that some of us has already so much dreamed.
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    • Focusing on developing the right-brain would give us the key of an workable-uUtopian life that some of us has already so much dreamed so much.
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    • The functions of this side of our brain has been undervalue by the system, it is more well perceived from the circle of acquaintances to follow lawyer study rather aiming for artistry.
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    • The functions of this side of our brain has been undervalued by the system, it is more well perceived from the circle of acquaintances to follow lawyers studying rather than aiming for artistry.
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    • However its right-brain also provides us empathy, compassion, understanding other people's emotions, inventiveness, big-picture thinking, creativity...
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    • All the missing valours we need for a better world are hidding by the elite leaving the population with the idea of nothing could really change.
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    • All the missing valours we need for a better world are hiddingen by the elite leaving the population with the idea of nothing that could really change.
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