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從Smalnassir來的文本 - English

    • Small paragraph.

    • My name is sahar, from Saudi Arabia, Computer Since student and i will be graduat next semester, I'm interested to learn many languages, design and, business analyst.
    • I have three brothers and tow sisters, I am the yungest, my father is retired and my mother set in home.

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