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- My identité
My name is RIM.
- My old is 22 years old.
- I am a studente. I like drawe.
- Give me your opinon aboute my English .

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- My identité
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- My identitéy
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- My name is RIM.
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Sentence 2
- My old is 22 years old.
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- ~~My old is~~I am 22 years old.
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- My ~~old~~age is 22 years ~~old~~.
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- ~~My old is~~I am 22 years old."¶
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- ~~My old is~~I am 22 years old.
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- I am a studente. I like drawe.
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- I am a studente. I like to drawe.
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- Give me your opinon aboute my English .
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