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  • This Time (part 5)

    • Give me a kris and I'll stab the responsibles in their necks, gouge their eyes and we'll watch spills their blood off them because they don't deserve to breath on our earth.
    • A parallel has been pictured in my mind comparing how disparate were those two periods, introspected myself impartially to heal a little more again my blinded eyes.
  • What I saw then isn't suppose to be seen by any of us.
    • There's no physically taking humain being life, killing in the true sens of the word.
    • But folks hasn't got the slightest idea of the horrors there's in store for us.

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    • Give me a kris and I'll stab the responsibles in their necks, gouge their eyes and we'll watch spills their blood off them because they don't deserve to breath on our earth.
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    • Give me a krischance and I'll stab those responsibles in their necks, gouge their eyes and we'll watch spills their blood spilling out off them because they don't deserve to breath on our earth.
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    • Give me a kris and I'll stab those responsibles in their necks, gougeing their eyes, and we'll watch spills their bloodblood spilling out off them because they don't deserve to breath on our earth.
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  • 문장 2
    • A parallel has been pictured in my mind comparing how disparate were those two periods, introspected myself impartially to heal a little more again my blinded eyes.
      투표하세요!
    • A parallel has been pictured in my mind comparing how disparate were those two periods, and I introspected myself impartially to heal a little more again in my blinded eyes.
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