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    • Personal skills. Can you make it more better please..

    • I always do my best whatever I do, whenever I work.
    • I worked in the service industry at the positions like bartender, waiter, assistant of supervisor and even in the kitchen.
    • From there I had learnt about greeting guests, serving them, hygiene and keeping working area clean and neat, teamwork, talking to customers, being professional with any people of any ages.
  • Also I had worked as a barber for more than one year.
    • This job also helped me improve my personal skill like working with customers.
    • After my work time I used to work in delivery additionally.
  • So I could see new places of the city and meet people of different ages and nationalities.
    • On my free times I worked in construction area because of that I could learn about thing for men like how to use tools, how to build house and about quality.
  • I like working on myself, on my body and mind, like doing exercise, gym, swimming and reading motivational books, watching movies about success.
  • Also I am good at leadership, using software programs, drawing and design.
    • So I can say that I am very motivated, sociable, transforable, professional, hard worker and honest person.
    • I have started thinking about my future and the stable job, that is why I chose your company.
  • I am ready for the next challenge of my life.

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