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  • A wedding day

    • Sharon and Joseph were a happy and young couple and they were going to get married.
    • Joseph forgot his clothes in her house the day before the wedding so that she decided to wake up early in the morning to take them to his house.
  • Walking alone for a woman in the early morning is dangerous in Nairobi, but it was an emergency and she felt she had to do it.
    • In the middle of the trip she met four smiling men next to a car.
    • In a few seconds she was put asleep by a soporific and put inside the car between two men.
    • Kidnapping of women to rape them are common in Africa.
    • The ISIS of Africa needs slaves for the sexual needs of their soldiers, to wash clothing, clean houses, do the housework and have kids who will be raised by their principles and they become the next generation of soldiers.
  • Sharon woke up four hours later.
    • When she realised what happened she tried to convince them let her free because it was her wedding day.
    • But they intimate her to shut up.
  • She found the strength to fight hard in order to get out of the car, and they beat her.
  • She kept on fighting with all her might.
    • And they became even more violence and she passed out.
    • Since she was very injured and to much rebel, they threw her body out of the car, while the car was going.
  • Fortunately a young guy saw the scene, took her to the hospital, and that saved her life.
    • The doctor told her she wouldn't have had any children tough, because the injuries to her private parts were too munch big.
    • Her boyfriend married her the same, but one month later he passed away because of an incident.
    • And people started to think she brought bad luck and it was worth staying far from her.
  • She also thought there must have been something wrong with her.
  • She fell into depression.
    • Five years later, her new gardener asked to her to marry him despite everything.
    • His parents tried to make it very difficult, but he was convicted of what he's doing.
    • One week after the wedding she was pregnant. 

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