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Text from vitaliib - English

    • My first correction about me.

  • Hello there!
    • My purpose in writing my own correction is improving my fluency in English.
    • It will be very helpful for me, and I'll be a grateful for your participation.
    • I think, that if person can express him thoughts and opinions in writing, he also will be able to tell about that by speaking.
    • In my future entries, I'm going to write about my occupation, passions, other activities.
    • Hope, you'll find my texts are intresting, I'll be trying to achieve this.
    • Its a great opportunity to share with you some features of lifestyle in another european country.
    • There are many beautiful people who just live their lives, and try to do what makes their happy.
    • Thanks for reading and corrections.

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