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Text from Little_rosie - English

  • MY SAD DAY!!!

    • Through this website, I know many people, someone is good who always friendly and polite, other one is not.
    • In fact, I get friend with many people and keep in touch with them until now.
    • But today is really a sad day for me.
    • One man is trying to contact me, his purpose is not get friend, he wants to cheat me and I'm so sad to know about that.
    • If I didn't search his picture on Google and found many story about him, I will never know how risky I get by online because this is the first time I meet this situation.
    • I sent email to him to let him know that I known his plan at all, hope he didn't cheat to get money from others but I know it's useless.
    • My main reason I join this page is I want to get true friend and improve my English so I hope anyone who wants to cheat or play with me please do not contact me.
    • P/s: Everyone should be carefull, I do not say people is bad, just a little but we still should be carefull.

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    • Through this website, I know many people, someone is good who always friendly and polite, other one is not.
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    • Through this website, I have come to know many people, s. Someone is good who is always friendly and polite, and some other one is not.
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    • Through this website, I knoew many people, someone is of them are good who always is friendly and, polite, other one isand some of them are not.
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  • Sentence 4
    • One man is trying to contact me, his purpose is not get friend, he wants to cheat me and I'm so sad to know about that.
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    • One man is trying to contact me, h. His purpose is not getto become my friend, but he wants to cheat me and I'm so sad to know about that.
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  • Sentence 5
    • If I didn't search his picture on Google and found many story about him, I will never know how risky I get by online because this is the first time I meet this situation.
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    • If I didn't search for his picture on Google and found many storyies about him, I willould have never known how risky I get byit would be to be friend with him online because this is the first time I meet with this situation.
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  • Sentence 6
    • I sent email to him to let him know that I known his plan at all, hope he didn't cheat to get money from others but I know it's useless.
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    • I sent an email to him to let him know that I known his plan at all, hopecame to know about his plan.I just hope that he didn't cheat to get money from others but I know it's useless.
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    • My main reason I join this page is I want to get true friend and improve my English so I hope anyone who wants to cheat or play with me please do not contact me.
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    • My main reason Ito join this page is that I want to getfind true friends and improve my English so I hope anyone who wants to cheat or play with me please do not contact me.
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