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  • HELLO FROM VIETNAM

    • Send my hello to everyone in the world.
    • Today is a beautiful day in Ho Chi Minh city because it's had a big rain yesterday so the weather is cool this morning, not too hot than normal.
    • However, I get a cold.
    • So this morning I tried to get up early to do some exercises, then have breakfast with bread (Banh mi) - a famous street food in Vietnam on the way to the office.
    • This time many companies in Vietnam are arranging travelling for their staffs.
    • My company is going to book a tour to visit Nam Du island, a beautiful side and wild place to enjoy fresh air, fresh sea food.
    • Actually, I like to visit some places outside of Vietnam like Thailand, Singapore... because I never ever go abroad for annual travelling before...

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    • Today is a beautiful day in Ho Chi Minh city because it's had a big rain yesterday so the weather is cool this morning, not too hot than normal.
      투표하세요!
    • Today is a beautiful day in Ho Chi Minh city because it's had a bigthere was a lot of rain yesterday so the weather is cool this morning, not too hotmuch hotter than normal.
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    • So this morning I tried to get up early to do some exercises, then have breakfast with bread (Banh mi) - a famous street food in Vietnam on the way to the office.
      투표하세요!
    • So this morning I tried to get up early to do some exercises, then have breakfast with bread (Banh mi) - a famous street food in Vietnam - on the way to the office.
      clayton_daclayton_da profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
    • So this morning I tried to get up early to do some exercises, then haved breakfast with bread (Banh mi) - a famous street food in Vietnam on themy way to the office.
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    • My company is going to book a tour to visit Nam Du island, a beautiful side and wild place to enjoy fresh air, fresh sea food.
      투표하세요!
    • My company is going to book a tour to visit Nam Du island, a beautiful side and wild place to enjoy fresh air, and fresh sea food.
      clayton_daclayton_da profile picture 댓글 1
      투표하세요!
    • My company is going to book a tour to visit Nam Du island, which has a beautiful seaside and is a wild place to enjoy fresh air, and fresh sea food.
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    • Actually, I like to visit some places outside of Vietnam like Thailand, Singapore... because I never ever go abroad for annual travelling before...
      투표하세요!
    • Actually, I would like to visit some places outside of Vietnam like Thailand, and Singapore... because I have never ever gone abroad for annual travelling before... ¶
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