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- Today i'm happy because i have my new motorcycle.
- My brother had an accident with my old motorcycle and she's finish in car breaks.

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- Today i'm happy because i have my new motorcycle.
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- Today i'm happy because i have gotten my new motorcycle.
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- Today iI'm happy because ~~i have my~~I got a new motorcycle.
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- My brother had an accident with my old motorcycle and she's finish in car breaks.
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- My brother had an accident with my old motorcycle and ~~she's finish in car breaks~~it's still having its breaks repaired.
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