添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

Olya2001からのテキスト - English

    • About me

  • Hi!
    • I`m sixteen years old and I decidedt that i should know english better.
    • It`s an enternational language, that helps to understand the other people from different countries.
    • I wanna make new friends here, so that`s one of the reasons why i`m here.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English