添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

LINHOからのテキスト - English

    • A little goes me.

  • I'm a police officer.
    • At the moment I'm having a busy life, divided between work, study and business.
    • I want to work enough that in the near future I may live a simple life.
  • I love the woods, trails and paintball.
    • I love my family, love to meet the family and also my friends.
    • I like to go out and have fun with my friends in pubs or in my house.
    • When I'm with my friends I do not like to talk about work.
  • I love animals.
    • My wife is a veterinary student and at home we have 4 dogs and 3 cats.
    • If you do not like aminiais not visit us.
    • I love soccer and my team is Grêmio, the best of Brazil.
    • We can discuss it if you want.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English