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- my best friend
- I want to tell about my best friend.
Her name is Karina.
- She has got 17.
- She is a beautiful, tall, pretty girl.
- Karina has long, straight, light hair, green eyes.
We like to hang out together.
- Karina likes listen to music especially rock and pop.
- She is also very ceative person, because she likes to do handmade crafts.
- I love my friend

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- my best friend
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- mMy best friend
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- I want to tell about my best friend.
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- I want to tell you about my best friend.
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- Her name is Karina.
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- She has got 17.
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- She ~~has got 17~~is 17 years old.
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- She ~~has got~~is 17.
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- She is a beautiful, tall, pretty girl.
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- She is a beautiful, and tall~~, pretty~~ girl.
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- She is a beautiful, tall, and pretty girl.
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- She is a ~~beautiful,~~ tall, pretty girl.
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- Karina has long, straight, light hair, green eyes.
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- Karina has long, straight, light hair, and green eyes.
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- Karina has green eyes and long, straight, light hair~~, green eyes~~.
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- We like to hang out together.
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- Karina likes listen to music especially rock and pop.
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- Karina likes listening to music especially rock and pop.
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- Karina likes to listen to music, especially rock and pop.
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- She is also very ceative person, because she likes to do handmade crafts.
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- She is also a very creative person, because she likes to doprepare handmade crafts.
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- She is also very creative person, because she likes to domake handmade crafts.
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句子 9
- I love my friend
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- I love my friend.
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從olena_krav來的文本 - English

my best friend

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