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    • electric cars

    • If you are in a big city, you will see a lot of cars but the problem is not cars, the main problem is the smog that they produce and we breath as a result a lot of people are getting sick or have health problems related with air pollution.
    • For that reason electric cars are a good option if you are a environmental person.
    • First of all, air pollution in our city is a serious problem over the last years due to climate change.
  • Electric cars do not produce any CO2 emissions, as a result they do not contaminate the environment like petrol cars.
    • If all of us have an electric car, the atmosphere even the air be better to breath.
  • Secondly, they reduce noise pollution.
  • Electric cars are much quieter since electric motors are capable of providing smooth drive with higher acceleration over longer distances.
    • Today's cars cause a lot of noise pollution, so this make people feel stressed.
    • Finally, these kind of cars are cheaper than conventional cars because the price of fuel are higher as a result people will spend a lot of money every day buying fuel.
    • Another advantage is that the governments are subsidizing cars for the purpose that people but them.
    • Conclusion, I would say that we need to be aware of our planet; we should find ways to contribute to protect the environment and do things that we know are good to take care of our world.

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    • If you are in a big city, you will see a lot of cars but the problem is not cars, the main problem is the smog that they produce and we breath as a result a lot of people are getting sick or have health problems related with air pollution.
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    • If you are in a big city, you will see a lot of cars but the problem is not cars, the main problem is the smogke that they produce and the air that we breath. aAs a result a lot of people are getting sick or have health problems related withto air pollution.
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    • Electric cars do not produce any CO2 emissions, as a result they do not contaminate the environment like petrol cars.
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    • Electric cars are much quieter since electric motors are capable of providing smooth drive with higher acceleration over longer distances.
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    • Finally, these kind of cars are cheaper than conventional cars because the price of fuel are higher as a result people will spend a lot of money every day buying fuel.
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    • Finally, these kind of cars are cheaper than conventional cars because the price of fuel areis higher a. As a result people will spend a lot of money every day buying fuel.
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    • Conclusion, I would say that we need to be aware of our planet; we should find ways to contribute to protect the environment and do things that we know are good to take care of our world.
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    • CIn conclusion, I would like to say that we need to be aware of our planet; we should find ways to contribute to protect the environment and do things that we know are good to take care of our world. ¶
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