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  • Essay:Clothes influence people's behaviour

  • Clothes play a great role in our life.
    • Some people think that they really affect the way we behave,while others claim they they are not connected with our behaviour at all.
  • From my point of view, our outfits really can have an impact on our behaviour.
  • There are several reasons why I think so.
    • Firstly, if we are dressed in expensive clothes, our self-esteem can increase.
    • If our trousers or a shirt happen to have a noticable spot which is impossible to remove immediately , we are sure to be sad and begin to be shy and reserved.
    • Secondly, when people wear, for example ,sports clothes, they start to associate themselves with sportsmen ,even if before they did not go in for sport.
    • Later such people realize that they want to do sports.
  • Clothes can motivate them to start jogging early in the morning or start playing football with their friends.
  • Nevertheless,there are people who think that clothes cannot influence our behaviour.
    • They say that we build out life ourselves and the way we are dressed cannot make us more or less hardworking or lazy.
    • There is a lot of truth in what they say,but I believe that in some cases clothes defines our behaviour.
  • In my experience it happens frequently enough.
  • In conclusion, I would like to say that there are different opinions about clothes.
    • Despite I respect various opinions,I believe that our clothes can sometimes shape our behaviour .

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