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  • The Great Siberian Way

    • I'm from Siberia, but now I live in Kaliningrad - I like to change cities, because it's interested and you can start a new life in a new city.
    • Also I like to travel.
    • I dream to travelling from Kaliningrad to Vladivostok by car (it's about 10000 km).
    • Actually travelling on the Great Siberian Way by train (it's the longest railway in the world) quite popular among foreign tourists.
    • But I think it isn't a very good idea travelling by Russian train about one week (train in Europe is more comfortable than in Russia)

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    • I'm from Siberia, but now I live in Kaliningrad - I like to change cities, because it's interested and you can start a new life in a new city.
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    • I'm from Siberia, but now I live in Kaliningrad - I like to change cities, because it's interesteding and you can start a new life in a new city.
    • I'm from Siberia, but now I live in Kaliningrad - I like to change cities, because it's interesteding and you can start a new life in a new city.
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    • I'm from Siberia, but now I live in Kaliningrad - I would like to change citiesy, because it's interesteding and by that you can start a new life in a new city.
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    • Actually travelling on the Great Siberian Way by train (it's the longest railway in the world) quite popular among foreign tourists.
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    • Actually, travelling on the Great Siberian Way by train (it'which is the longest railway in the world) is quite popular among foreign tourists.
    • Actually, travelling on the Great Siberian Way by train (it'which is the longest railway in the world) is quite popular among foreign tourists.
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    • Actually travelling on the Great Siberian Way by train (it', which is the longest railway in the world) is quite popular among foreign tourists.
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    • But I think it isn't a very good idea travelling by Russian train about one week (train in Europe is more comfortable than in Russia)
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    • But I think it isn't a very good idea to travelling by Russian train for about one week, as (trains in Europe isare more comfortable than in Russia).
    • But I think it isn't a veryguess, it's not a good idea to travelling by on a Russian train about onefor a week (train in Europe is more comfortable than in Russia)
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    • But I think it isn't a very good idea to travelling by Russian train aboutfor one week, since (trains in Europe isare more comfortable than in Russia).
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