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Сообщение от jagoda_pil - English

  • The letter

    • Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for a scholarship which is offered by the Koreanish government for foreign students.
    • I found out about this scholarship from the Seoul National University Internet web-site.
    • I am a ninetheen – year – old graduate.
    • This year I took Matura exams.
    • I have been learning English for eight years and I am at an intermediate level.
    • I would like to begin studies in Korea because I have been interested in Korea for six years.
    • In addition I would like to know Koreanish people mentality and behaviors but all experience I had only on the Internet and I have an understatement experiences.
    • I have been read about Koreanish history, culture and tradition.
    • Moreover, Koreanish cinematography and marketing fascinated me and I would like to bottom the knowledge about these techniques.
  • The reason why I am learning about Korea is that it is my passion.
    • In my opinion it is really interesting country.
    • I believe, that I am the best candidate for this scholarship because I am a hard-working, reliable and open-minded person.
  • I would like to know more about Korea.
    • Moreover, staying in Korea will give me the chance to learn Koreanish language, which really fascinates me Studying in Korea is my he dream.
    • I would like to study and If it is possible to work in Korea, I will do it.
  • I hope that my application will be considered positively.
    • I look forward to hearing from you.
  • Yours faithfully, XYZ

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