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Testo da IgorBlagodarev - English

  • My Dream

  • Hi everyone!
  • My name is Igor, i am twenty two years old, and i am from Moscow, Russia.
    • I am study at University and i have a work too.
    • Want to tell you about my dream.
    • I want to move in Australia.
    • I heard about beautiful cities, warm, pleasant climate, from people who moved.
  • You can surf, when weather is good, or you can just go for a walk.
    • At the evening you can go to the beach and enjoy an evening ocean.
    • But, most importantly, i heard about intelligent, educated, cultured people, it attracts me the most.
    • In Moscow people, are also educated and cultured, but the attitude of the government to the people, change them for the worse.
    • I want to move in Australia, go to the college and become a lawyer.
    • I want to know the laws and helping people.
  • I want to make a family in Australia, cause the laws of this country guarantee social protection to me and my family.
    • At this moment this is impractiable.
    • I don't have money for moved.
    • And in english language i am just begginer.
  • But everyday i make little steps forwards (this site is also a step forward by the way).
    • I have a long way, but i will not stop.

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