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    • my family

    • I live with my parents, my sister, my sister's daughter and my grandmother.
    • My house have three floors, two bathrooms and four rooms.
    • my relationship with my parents is good but i have problems with my grandmother because she is very dure.
    • Also, i have a dog, the name is "salome", salome have five years old and is a schnauzer.
    • i can't study in this moment because i don't pass to the university and i helped to my sister with de baby.
    • i wish study "modern languajes" in "the caldas university", for this reason i need learn english and frensh for enter with the bases.

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    • my relationship with my parents is good but i have problems with my grandmother because she is very dure.
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      My relationship with my parents is good but iI have problems with my grandmother because she is very durrude.

    • my relationship with my parents is good but i have problems with my grandmother because she is very durestrict.

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      My relationship with my parents is good. but iI have problems with my grandmother because she is very durestrict.
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      My relationship with my parents is good but iI have problems with my grandmother because she is very dureifficult.
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    • Also, i have a dog, the name is "salome", salome have five years old and is a schnauzer.
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    • Also, i have a dog, the name is "salome", salome haves five years old and is a schnauzer.
    • Also, iI have a dog, the name isd "sSalome", sSalome haveis five years old and is a schnauzer.
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    • Also, i have a five year old dog, thwhose name is "salome", salome have five years old and.it is a schnauzer.
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    • Also, i have a dog, the name is "salome", salome haveI have also a five years old and isdog, a schnauzer named "salome".
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    • Also, iI have a dog, the name is "salome", salome have five years old and is a schnauzer. called "salome", a schnauzer who is five years old.
    • Also, i have a dog, the name is "salome", salome have named Salome. He's a five years old and is a schnauzer.
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    • i can't study in this moment because i don't pass to the university and i helped to my sister with de baby.
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      I can't study inat this moment because iI don't pass to the university and i helped toI am helping my sister with deher baby.

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      I can't study in this moment because i don't pass tohaven't been acepted in the university and i helped toso I´m helping my sister with deher baby.

    • i can't study in this moment because i donid't pass to the university admtion exam and i helped to my sister with detaking care of her baby.
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      I can't study inat thise moment because i don't pass to theI didn't get into university and i helped toI am helping my sister with deher baby.
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    • i wish study "modern languajes" in "the caldas university", for this reason i need learn english and frensh for enter with the bases.
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    • i wish study "modern languajes" in "the caldas university", for this reason i need learn english and frensh for enter with the bases.

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      I wish to study "modern languajges" in "the cCaldas university", for this reason iI need to learn eEnglish and fFrensch for enter withknowing the baseics.
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    • i wish to study "modern languajes" in "the caldas university", for this reason i need to learn english and frensh forto enter with the university having the baseics.
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      I wish to study "modern languajges" inat "tThe cCaldas uUniversity", f. For this reason iI need to learn eEnglish and fFrensch forto enter with the baseics.
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