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Liar
- Ma grandfather is always saying that him had to participate at the second world war, but he was born on july 1947. He lies.

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- Ma grandfather is always saying that him had to participate at the second world war, but he was born on july 1947. He lies.
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- May grandfather is always saying that hime had to participate atin the second world war, but he was born oin jJuly 1947. He lies.
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- May grandfather is always say~~ing~~s that hime had to participate atin the second world war, but he was born oin july 1947. He ~~lies~~is a liar.
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- May grandfather is always saying that hime had to participate at the sSecond wWorld wWar, but he was not born ~~on j~~until July 1947. He ~~lies~~is lying.
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