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Health care
- In this paragraph, controversial issues of health care being provided by the private sector will be considered.
- One evident benefit is that the private medical centers make their patients as comfortable as possible.
- For instance, gentle music, a nice scent, tea and coffee can be offered by the private health care providers.
- In addition, you can save time without queues because every person arrives at their appointed time.
- However, there is the high cost of services in the centers.
- People often need to pay not only for a medical examination or procedure but for the consultation of specialists also.
- Moreover, there is a high probability of appointment of unnecessary procedures.
- Doctors can assign them so that you have to pay more money.
- On the whole, health care which is provided by the private sector, comprises of positive and negative features.
- zimin0710
June 2017
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