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    • Health care

    • In this paragraph there will be considered controversial issues of health care being provided by the private sector.
  • One evident benefit is that the private medical centers make their patients as comfortable as possible.
    • For instance, gentle music, a nice scent, tea and coffee can be offered by the private health care providers.
    • In addition, you can save time without queues because every person arrives at the pointed time.
  • However, there is the high cost of services in the centers.
    • People often need to pay not only for a medical examination or procedures but the consultation of specialists also.
    • Moreover, there is a high probability of appointing of unnecessary procedures.
  • Doctors can assign them so that you have to pay more money.
    • On the whole, health care which is provided by the private sector, consider controversial issues.

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