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  • Personal Statement

    • The first decision I had taken by my self in my life is when I choose to study in the hospitality secondary school, I took this decision because cooking is one of my hobbies, and as I like to help and serve the people so I need to be involved in this industry.
    • At that time, I have written my vision that I am going to be a successful and well known person in this industry.
    • Therefore, I started with my missions by getting more experiences and qualifications.
    • The passion I have for foreign languages and international qualifications ensured my successful study in London College as well as some English and French curses.
    • After finishing my study, I started looking for a job in the tourism industry and I got a job opportunity to work as tourism sales staff with a big travel and tourism company in Saudi Arabia and I worked with them for 2 and half years.
    • I started with this department because I believe that if I want to success, then I need to start from the beginning to experience as much as can from this industry in order to reach my goal.
    • As a tourism sales executive, I was required to sell wide range of tourism services components to our customers such as flights, accommodations, meeting rooms, restaurants, transfers, cruises…etc.
    • This job gave me opportunity to obtain sales skills, and to become acquainted with providing a good customer care service, and with the work of such people as hotel, travel, and tourism managers.
  • I was deeply impressed by their diligence to satisfy every need of their customers.
    • I have realized the responsibility of their professions, but I have also understood how satisfied they are when their clients are happy.
    • As I worked with most of the hospitality and tourism services providers and I had good relations with them to be well known at the market, so I started getting better job opportunities from other travel and tourism companies.
    • As I saw that time the growth of the online travel agencies and the services which they provide, I realized that the online is the future market for this industry.
  • Therefore, I took the opportunity to work as a product development manager in a good online travel agency in order to follow the new trend of the industry.
    • I was so happy with my new job as I learnt and did many innovative things which was very useful for me to get new experiences.
    • I have worked with a professional team and we succeed to develop B2C, B2B and extranet systems for the company.
    • As a lover of nature and meeting new people with new cultures, the thing I like to do the most is to travel to new places which help me to get more experience about the touristic destinations.
    • Playing piano, photographing, and swimming are my hobbies too, these are my ways to relax, clear my mind, and keep fit.
    • I am reliable and positive person, who enjoys challenges and never gives up.
    • I dream of managing an international wholesaler travel and tourism company, I realize how great my ambitions are and how hard I must work to achieve them but I think it is most important to have a wish and will.
    • When one who has strong wishes is self-confident and self-motivated, when he is patient and determined he can fulfill them.
    • I know that besides all these qualities I must also have skills in order to succeed in this industry in which there is such a competition.
    • Studying Tourism management I will acquire the necessary skills and knowledge to be a prosperous travel and tourism manager.

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    • The first decision I had taken by my self in my life is when I choose to study in the hospitality secondary school, I took this decision because cooking is one of my hobbies, and as I like to help and serve the people so I need to be involved in this industry.
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    • The first decision I hmad takene by my self in my life is when I choose to study in the hospitality secondary school,. I tookmade this decision because cooking is one of my hobbies, and as. Because I like to help and serve the people so, I need to be involved in this industry.
    • The first decision I hmad takene by my self in my life is when I choose to study in the hospitality secondary school,. I tookmade this decision because cooking is one of my hobbies, and as I like to help and serve the people so, I need to be involved in this industry.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 1Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 1
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    • The passion I have for foreign languages and international qualifications ensured my successful study in London College as well as some English and French curses.
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    • The passion I have for foreign languages and international qualifications ensured my successful study in London College as well as some English and French courses.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4
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    • After finishing my study, I started looking for a job in the tourism industry and I got a job opportunity to work as tourism sales staff with a big travel and tourism company in Saudi Arabia and I worked with them for 2 and half years.
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    • After finishing my study, I started looking for a job in the tourism industry and I got a job opportunity to work as a tourism sales staff member with a big travel and tourism company in Saudi Arabia and. I worked with them for 2 and half years.
    • After finishing my study, I started looking for a job in the tourism industry and I got a job opportunity to work as a tourism sales staff member with a biglarge travel and tourism company in Saudi Arabia and I worked with them for 2 and a half years.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5
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    • I started with this department because I believe that if I want to success, then I need to start from the beginning to experience as much as can from this industry in order to reach my goal.
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    • I started with this department because I believe that if I want to successed, then I need to start from the beginning to experience as much as can from this industry in order to reach my goal.
    • I started with this department because I believe that if I want to success, thened, I need to start from the beginning to experience as much as canpossible from this industry in order to reach my goal.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6
  • Satz 7
    • As a tourism sales executive, I was required to sell wide range of tourism services components to our customers such as flights, accommodations, meeting rooms, restaurants, transfers, cruises…etc.
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    • As a tourism sales executive, I was required to sell a wide range of tourism services components to our customers such as flights, accommodations, meeting rooms, restaurants, transfers, cruises…etc.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 7Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 7
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    • This job gave me opportunity to obtain sales skills, and to become acquainted with providing a good customer care service, and with the work of such people as hotel, travel, and tourism managers.
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    • This job gave me opportunity to obtain sales skills, and to become acquainted with providing a good customer care service, and with theto work ofwith such people as hotel, travel, and tourism managers.
    • This job gave me the opportunity to obtain sales skills, and to become acquainted withexperience in providing a good customer care service, and with the work of such peoplethe chance to become acquainted with people from various aspects of the industry such as hotel, travel, and tourism managers.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8
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    • As I worked with most of the hospitality and tourism services providers and I had good relations with them to be well known at the market, so I started getting better job opportunities from other travel and tourism companies.
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    • As I worked with most of the hospitality and tourism services providers and I had good relations with them to be well known at the market, so, I started getting better job opportunities from other travel and tourism companies.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 11Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 11
  • Satz 12
    • As I saw that time the growth of the online travel agencies and the services which they provide, I realized that the online is the future market for this industry.
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    • As I saw that time the growth ofhow quickly the online travel agencies and their services which they providegrew, I realized that the online is the future market ofor this industry is online.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 12Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 12
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    • Therefore, I took the opportunity to work as a product development manager in a good online travel agency in order to follow the new trend of the industry.
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    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 13Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 13
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    • As a lover of nature and meeting new people with new cultures, the thing I like to do the most is to travel to new places which help me to get more experience about the touristic destinations.
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    • As a lover of nature and meeting new people withfrom new cultures, the thingwhat I like to do the most is to travel to new places which helps me to get moreain experience about thein travelling to popular touristic destinations.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 16Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 16
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    • I dream of managing an international wholesaler travel and tourism company, I realize how great my ambitions are and how hard I must work to achieve them but I think it is most important to have a wish and will.
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    • I dream of managing an international wholesaler travel and tourism company,. I realize how great my ambitions are and how hard I must work to achieve them but I think it is most important to have a wish and will.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 19Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 19
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    • I know that besides all these qualities I must also have skills in order to succeed in this industry in which there is such a competition.
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    • I know that besides all these qualities I must also have the skills needed in order to succeed in this industry in which there is such a competition.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 21Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 21
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