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  • Ladies and Gentlemen, Good evening!
  • I’m very glad to stand here and give you a speech.
    • Ok, we all know this word--connection.
    • Try to think of some obviously connections, such as economic globalization, environmental pollution, informationization.
    • The first time i known the word when i was in a political class in high school.
    • However, it was difficulty for me to understand why connection is one of the vital viewpoint of dialetical meterialism, which was found by Marx.
    • The more i reflect on life, the more is deeply convinced that connectional idea should be a basic of our opinion toward life.
    • That effects us tremendously, no matter macrosopically or micoscopically.
  • Individuals and organizations can obtain wealth with the idea of connection.
    • Managers get handsome salaries for organizating a varity of sources in place.
    • Investors also make wonderful profits by observing all kinds of information to predict the trends.
  • A case in point is Warren E.
    • Buffett, the most successful invertor, as a legend in the history of investment, who was the richest man in the world in 2008. what’s more, so are the firms.
  • According to the data, the express industry of China be valuated 119 million in 2010, which would raise at least 20% every year.
    • The past decades has witnessed a boom in express industry, mainly being contributed by online shopping.
  • If one would note the connection between them, how rich he was.
    • People can keep fit physically and mentally by utilizing the idea of connection.
  • As one of Chinese cultural treasures, Chinese traditional medicine, which seems like a depth, holds connection as its main idea, building theories on that.
  • Soup, being guided by theories of Chinese traditional medicine, helps people to adapt the alterations of the weather and internal changes of the body.
    • However, losing the balance of your work and rest, expecially a serious issue among youth.
    • Some around 20 to 30 were sudden death for over work have been heard this years.
  • So we should handle all parts of our life, keeping the connection idea in our minds.
  • Sharing, cooperation, communication and innovation capability, which have been emphasizing by contemporary educators.
  • Indeed, they are the other forms of connection.
  • Of course, sharing, communication and cooperation are connecting people.
  • How about creativity?
  • That is a recreation, on the basis of discovery.
  • Here are some works.
  • Only having a connection idea in mind can they create such excellent works.
  • With above-mentioned and analyze, you may be conscious of the connection idea plays a key role in our life.
  • With this mind, whatever we do would have a more integrated opinion and better access to dream, so that your life in charge by yourself.
    • Here i recommend you a book named”Philosophy and Life” , that would change your mind used to be.

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