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Сообщение от Carpol - English

    • A PUBLIC FIGURE IN MY COUNTRY AT THE MOMENT

    • First of all, I have to say that I very keen on tennis, that is why I have chosen Rafael Nadal as an example of a public Spanish figure.
  • Rafael Nadal was born in Mallorca, a famous and touristic Spanish island.
    • He is 30 years old more or less.
    • He has won a lot of awards such as: Grand Slams, Roland Garros, Winbledom… He is one of the best tennis players in the tennis history and maybe the best in clay.
  • The truth is that he is the most relevant Spanish sportsman of all time.
  • I don’t think anyone would argue with that.
  • Furthermore, I like Rafael Nadal due to his personality and character.
    • He is very competitive but firstly with himself.
  • He is cheerful and pretty humble, that is important in sports; it is advisable to know how to lose.
    • On top of that he always has kind words to his opponents, and he encourages children to do sports.
    • Personally, I am rather proud of Rafa Nadal is a Spanish public figure.

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