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    • The Food Impact to Our Healty

    • Like as we know, food is the thing that always consumpted by living things.
    • Food is so influential for our bodies.
    • When we intake the food, food will be digestible by our digestive system.
    • Many people don’t care about what their consumption for their bodies, They just cares about delicacy or taste and don’t know what will happen if their food are not healty to intake.
    • Now, people had discover chemical material that can make the food are more delicious, they called MSG or Monosodium Glutamat.
    • Almost All the food in the world use this thing to make their food more delicious, Like instant noodle and instant ingredient.
    • But, if we intake this thing to our bodies too often, we can lost the body defense and the cancer will arrive.
    • We must reduce the usage of Monosodium Glutamat, And back to era that the nature seasoning will used like before.

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    • Many people don’t care about what their consumption for their bodies, They just cares about delicacy or taste and don’t know what will happen if their food are not healty to intake.
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    • Many people don’t care about what theiry consumptione for their bodies,. They just cares about the delicacy or taste and don’t know what will happen if their food areis not healthy tofor intake.
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    • Now, people had discover chemical material that can make the food are more delicious, they called MSG or Monosodium Glutamat.
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    • Now, people hadve discovered chemical material that can make the food are more delicious, they called MSG or Monosodium Glutamate.
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    • Almost All the food in the world use this thing to make their food more delicious, Like instant noodle and instant ingredient.
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    • Almost Aall the food manufacturer in the world use this thing to make their food more delicious, Llike instant noodles and instant ingredientpasta.
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    • But, if we intake this thing to our bodies too often, we can lost the body defense and the cancer will arrive.
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    • But, if we intakconsume this thing to our bodies too often, we can lost thee our¶
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    • We must reduce the usage of Monosodium Glutamat, And back to era that the nature seasoning will used like before.
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    • We must reduce the usage of Monosodium Glutamate, Aand go back to an era that thwhere natureal seasoning willas used like before. ¶
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