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  • Ecology

    • Nowadays, a lot of people use gadgets, cars ( for example, two or three cars for one family) and less of us think about the nature.
    • Gadgets, cars, machines and waste products spoil Earth, which is actually our real home.
    • If we won't take care about ourselves and each other, the air will be dirty and there will be no oxygen, water will have a lot of mud so we just kill ourselves and moreover others member of our huge ecosystem.
    • I talk about animals and plants, fish and birds, they all are our friends.
    • As for me, Greenpeace actually do a lot, but if everyone will take care about ecology, such organizations like Greenpeace just will disappear.

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    • Nowadays, a lot of people use gadgets, cars ( for example, two or three cars for one family) and less of us think about the nature.
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    • Nowadays, a lot of people use gadgets, cars ( for example, two or three cars for one family) and less of usnobody thinks about the nature.
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    • If we won't take care about ourselves and each other, the air will be dirty and there will be no oxygen, water will have a lot of mud so we just kill ourselves and moreover others member of our huge ecosystem.
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    • If we won't take care aboutof ourselves and each other, the air around us will be dirty and, there will be no oxygen, left and the water will have a lot of mud s. So, not only do we just kill ourselves and moreover, we kill others members of our huge ecosystem as well.
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    • As for me, Greenpeace actually do a lot, but if everyone will take care about ecology, such organizations like Greenpeace just will disappear.
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    • As for me, Greenpeace actually do a lot, but if everyone will take care about ecology, such organizations like Greenpeace just willwill just disappear. ¶
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