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  • Beijing Launches the First Aircraft Carrier Made in China

    • This time the former USSR is not involved with it.
    • China is narrowing the time to develope its navy and launched the first Chinese-made aircraft carrier .
  • Unlike the previous one, called Liaoning, developed from a Soviet hull, which had been previously acquired by Ukraine and activated three years ago, this one was built in the China Shipbuilding Industry shipyard.
    • This launch in doubly quick time is a sign from China, which wants to boast of its naval power so as to balance the tension on the Korean peninsula and along the South China sea From 1956, when China and Russia carried out military drills for the first time in Shanghai, to last year, China has been working hard to strengthen its leadership in the area of the South China sea.
  • A strong navy is the precondition for national protection.
    • The navy is going at full speed and the aircraft carrier Liaoning won’t be the only one, by 2020 Beijing will have built others.

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    • Unlike the previous one, called Liaoning, developed from a Soviet hull, which had been previously acquired by Ukraine and activated three years ago, this one was built in the China Shipbuilding Industry shipyard.
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    • This launch in doubly quick time is a sign from China, which wants to boast of its naval power so as to balance the tension on the Korean peninsula and along the South China sea From 1956, when China and Russia carried out military drills for the first time in Shanghai, to last year, China has been working hard to strengthen its leadership in the area of the South China sea.
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    • This launch in doublya quick time is a sign from China, which wants to boast of its naval power so as to balance the tension on the Korean peninsula and along the South China sea.
      From 1956, when China and Russia carried out military drills for the first time in Shanghai, to last year, China has been working hard to strengthen its leadership in the
      area of the South China sea area.
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    • The navy is going at full speed and the aircraft carrier Liaoning won’t be the only one, by 2020 Beijing will have built others.
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    • The navy is go growing at full speed and the aircraft carrier Liaoning won’t be the only one, by 2020 Beijing willould have built otherssome more.
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