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Text from mimi33720 - English

    • progress in english

    • Hello, I want to progress in english.
    • I studied it but i'm afraid to speak Could you help me to speak better?
    • In first time i explain to you who i am.
  • My name is Myriam.
    • I live in Barsac from France.
    • It's un little city products of white wine very famous (Sauternes).
  • I'm 43 years old.
    • I'm two childrens.
    • One boy, 17 years old and one girl, 15 years old. I'm a nurse.
    • My job consists to introduce the people for a depist of the VHI or ITS.
  • It's a good job.
    • It's a preventive health.
    • I care for the people in the sexuality to reduce the risk.
  • Thank you for your time. Myriam

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English