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AIDER A CORRIGER MAINTENANT !Corrigé

Rédigé par milas60000 - English

  • Cover letter

    • Dear Sir or Madam, I have carefully reviewed your announcement regarding the position of Controller.
    • I would therefore like to apply, because I am deeply convinced that I can meet your expectations.
  • First of all I want to stress that I have carefully considered this application.
    • Your business is in a business area that I know and that I particularly appreciate.
    • I also want to praise the merits of your effectiveness and clearly aware of the level of complexity and demand expected by large companies like yours.
    • In response to the details of your ad, I currently have 12 years of professional experience in management, 3 years on part-time and 4 years abroad.
  • I did my 3 years of apprenticeship in two major French companies while attending an academic training 2 days a week.
    • I was able to take my first steps in the world of management con-trol.
    • I then decided to go abroad to England and Canada in order to have a real international experience but also to maximize my English skills.
    • During each of these experiments, I was able to participate in cost control and compliance with the financial strategy.
  • I am proud to have been able to evolve and to occupy more and more strategic positions during my various opportunities.
    • In recent years, I have held positions of Business Partner and Central Controller during which I have been involved in functional or hierarchical management.
  • I was also able to carry out periodic forecasts and budgets in different companies and for various types of activities.
    • Through personal initiative and with the agreement of my managers, I also carried out projects to optimize or dematerialize I also had the privilege of being in touch with a multitude of trades, personalities and nationalities.
  • This allowed me to develop my knowledge in fields that did not form an integral part of my university education.
  • In particular, I was able to optimize my skills in industrial engineering techniques, project management and sales force.
  • My professional mastery of the business language allowed me to work on an international perimeter and thus get to know different management standards I am confident that I can perform the job, and I am excited about the idea of working for your company.
  • If you would like to schedule an interview to discuss my interest on this job application, I will be available at your convenience.
  • Yours sincerely,

VEUILLEZ SVP AIDER A CORRIGER CHAQUE PHRASE ! - English