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The Graduation Exhibition
- I slept almost all day long.
- Except for doing laundry, eating “brunch’’at 4 pm and having 2 hours French class, I lay in bed and slept like a log.
- The first graduation exhibition was held last weekend, all I needed to do was collecting money and issuing a receipt.
- In addition,when I saw there were somebody stood in front of my showcase, I walked to them and introduce the content of my essay.
- To compare with micro-film and magazine which were made by my classmates, the essaies was not popular to the public.
- I truly felt regretful that I chossing writing essay as my graduation works, the process was tough and it is not representative to what I learned in college.
- So, I was surprised that there were 3~5 people opened my essay and read it !
- Actually, staying with my classmates was the most annoyed thing to me.
- Acrroding to the relationship between classmates in my class is not good, I choose to be quiet and become a invisible man to avoid embroiling in the dispute.
- Sometimes, I think I have kind of demophobia,I really want to borrow invisibility cloak from Harry Poter.
- Sadly,we still have to held the second times graduation exhibition in Taipei and the last one in our school.
- I felt so tired of doing those stuff……
- DebbyKApril 2017100% GOOD (1 votes)
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