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Text from DebbyK - English

    • The Rainy Days#1

    • I loved rainy day.I lived a boring and meaningless life before 18,just like most of the students in Asia.It was easy to feel pleasure because of the weather changing.To me,it meant that:"Today is not as normal as usual. ".
    • In the rainy days,my friends and I always walked out the classroom in break time, went downstairs to the pond which near the teachers offices.It was so delightful to see the raindrop fell down from the cloudy and gray sky then touched the water surface briskly.
    • As soon as the rain drop into the pond and cause ripples,the fat fishes under the water thought that someone was throwing foods,so those cute animals swam to us with their opening ,big and funny mouse to ask us for feeding them.
    • This is one of the memory about rainy day which was belong to me and my best friend in senior high school.

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  • Sentence 1
    • I loved rainy day.I lived a boring and meaningless life before 18,just like most of the students in Asia.It was easy to feel pleasure because of the weather changing.To me,it meant that:"Today is not as normal as usual. ".
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    • I loved rainy day.s. I lived a boring and meaningless life before I turned 18, just like most of the students in Asia. It was easy to feel pleasure because of the weather changing. To me, it meant that: "Today is not as normal as usual. ".
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  • Sentence 2
    • In the rainy days,my friends and I always walked out the classroom in break time, went downstairs to the pond which near the teachers offices.It was so delightful to see the raindrop fell down from the cloudy and gray sky then touched the water surface briskly.
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    • IOn thea rainy days, my friends and I always walked out of the classroom inat break time, and went downstairs to the pond which was near the teachers' offices. It was so delightful to see the raindrops feall down from the cloudy and gray sky, then toucheding the water surface briskly.
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  • Sentence 3
    • As soon as the rain drop into the pond and cause ripples,the fat fishes under the water thought that someone was throwing foods,so those cute animals swam to us with their opening ,big and funny mouse to ask us for feeding them.
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    • As soon as the rain dropfell into the pond and caused ripples, the fat fishes under the water thought that someone was throwing foods, so those cute animals swam to us with their opening ,jaws open, big and funny mouse toths that asked us forto feeding them.
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