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  • DO YOU KNOW FREEGANS?

  • The purpose of this article is to show you who the freegans are.
  • It’s the truth, it’s an unknown issue.
  • First of all, freegan is a recent term to describe a person who uses things which other people don’t want.
    • These sorts of things may be from food to furniture or clothes.
  • Freegans point out that we throw away a lot of waste and some stuff which could have a second life.
  • They are against consumerism and they claim that it’s possible.
    • This movement was born in the mid 90’s, and grew with the anti-globalisation and environmental movements as well.
    • To sum up, the final reason they have is to take care of our planet.
  • All things considered, I believe that it’s quite great for our planet to reduce our consumerism and reuse unwanted items.
  • Who hasn’t reused a cousin’s sweater?
    • Nevertheless, I think that eat food from rubbish has some risks, it isn’t advisable.
  • Pros and cons must be taken into account.

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