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  • Presentation for a job interview (in English)

  • Paul XXX, I am 26 years old.
    • I am a graduate from a French engineering School in Food Industry in Lille.
    • I’m fascinating by science, cooking and ingredients.
    • That’s why I’ve chosen these studies and wanted to become an R&D engineer in food industry So I made my first internship as assistant engineer in the R & D department at the headquarters of XXX.
    • XXX is the world leader in the processing of vegetables.
  • In this Internship, I organized and conducted tests on pilot plants.
    • XXXX indeed wanted to know the impact of different processing methods on the nutritional qualities of vegetables.
  • This experience was very interesting and has confirmed my career plan.
  • I also discovered the scope of R & D and interaction with other services such as production and quality.
    • Then, I wished to experience production.
  • This is why I have done a specialization in food production management.
    • This specialization allowed me to make a six months internship of 3 months in school There was a theoretical part with distance learning and case studies.
    • The other part was a mission in the host company.
    • XXX is a specialist in milk cracking, which is to separate the different components of milk by filtration and to make milk powder by spray drying.
    • My mission in this business was to conduct the launching of a new line of milk powder packaging.
    • For this, I’ve done start testing with the supplier.
  • I had a role of interface with the provider, production and other services such as new construction, maintenance and quality.
  • I have written protocols for use and I realized the training of operators in the use of the new packaging line.
    • This experience was very rewarding it was an opportunity to understand the constraints and needs of a production workshop.
    • After that, I realized a 6-months internship within the business XXX, which was extended by a fixed-term of contract one year.
    • XXX is leading the transformation of chicory.
    • I worked on various problems : I work on all stages of the process of chicory transformation: drying, roasting, extraction and spray drying.
  • For one year I worked on ways to reduce acrylamide in chicory.
    • To realize this, I did many trials in testing center and using pilot plant from suppliers (Germany, Denmark).
  • As in coffee, roasting plays a vital role in the quality of the finished product.
    • I had the opportunity to test different technologies roasting: conduction, convection and mixed.
  • I was given a fixed-term contract for the company Jean Caby as R&D project manager.
  • XXXX is a company specialized in cooked meats.
  • I led various projects to develop new products for retailers.
    • I also worked on the improvement of existing product range for regulatory updates.
  • I managed the project from beginning to end until the industrialization phase.
  • I designed, prepared and carried out tests, on production workshops.
    • I also assured monitoring and analysis of the product Thanks to this experience, I improved my project management.
    • I was required to work with different services: production, quality, management control, and marketing.
    • I had to exercise autonomy because the head of R & D was based in Britain.

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