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從Gloria88來的文本 - English

    • Who am I?

    • My name is Gloria, i have been living in France from 4 years.
    • I get my master degree in Marketing.
    • My dream is to work in marketing or business development in companies who make import and export in Africa, espacially in East Africa.

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