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  • My internship regarding business operations

    • Hello everybody, today I am writing about my internship.
  • I have linked it with operations strategy.
  • Hope you like this, and thank you in advance for the corrections.
    • :) Regarding business operations, as the aim of our society is to keep our organization running smoothly and our guests satisfied, I will talk about the prices we have to change regularly and the embellishment of the hotel.
  • These two aspects are part of the strategies of the hotel, therefore it will be linked with the five competitive objectives which are quality, speed, dependability, flexibility, cost.
  • Quality: (being right) prices have to be reasonable, not too high regarding the concurrence but not too low in order to be sure that we will make profits.
    • They also have to be reasonable regarding the quality, the level of the rooms and services offered.
  • Speed: (being fast) prices have to be changed every time.
    • We have to be ready, to check all the events that take place in Nice so that we know when we have to change our prices.
    • Otherwise, people could have the time to reserve a room at a lower price.
  • Then, the decoration of the hotel has to change quickly.
    • For instance, once Carnival was ended, the decoration had to be taken out the same day during the night.
  • Exceptionally I will not talk about dependability because I have nothing to say on it regarding the fact that we change prices or decorate the hotel.
  • Flexibility: (being able to change) Everything is done on the internet.
    • We have a direct access to the tour operators’ websites, so that we are able to change prices simply.
  • Thanks to the staff, we are also able to change the decorations every time.
  • Cost: (being productive) And to finish, when designing the hotel, we have to take the prices of the decorations into account, so that we do not spend too much.
  • And we also choose our prices regarding some criteria, in order to be productive and not lose all the possible clients.

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